Here's a song I wrote. It won second place at 'Cul-Ah' 2007
Twitching Eye
(Verse)
Bobbing in a sea of music,
A canopy - a colourful web.
Past the drunken dancers,
Past the glowing cigarettes.
It's There I see you, sipping
On a drink that's long been dipping
In a fist of ice to stay alive...
I walk up to the bar, I take a look around -
But I don't get very far, I come crashing to the ground...
(Chorus) x 2
Because of your twitching eye...
(Verse)
My heart begins to race
As I steal glances at your face,
I see you winking away...
Down my back there goes a shiver,
My thoughts go hither-thither,
I contemplate making a move...
(Chorus) x2
(Verse)
I push My drink right over,
Act like I own the place.
"How's it hanging sugar?"
Your fist goes in my face.
I stumble off my chair,
People gather all around,
Everybody stares,
Nobody makes a sound.
I'm embarassed and bewildered,
Questions, "Am I high?"
In a while my thoughts are filtered,
It's then I realize...
(Chorus) x 4
Monday, February 12, 2007
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7 comments:
Ah, hahaha!
I like!
You should write more songs... :)
thank you! I wrote it in such a hurry that I couldn't give the thing a decent structure!
How much more structure you want? It's very fine as it is
Exactly! It's fine this way...
Now post the poem you wrote at "Cul-ah" pliss
i don't have that, it was bad anyway
Oh... :(
spelling mistakes are there!!!!
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